Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. xxx blunt. Try harder.«1234» Made me cum hard and I’d rate it a 8/10.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-24 06:59:40kyle you need n to suck you dryanonymous readerReport 2011-03-06 08:59:43Not too bad of a story, but get a proofreader who does well in English, because your spelling, grammar, punctuation, possessives, and tenses have many errors, which make this story difficult to read.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-24 13:11:15Good story! Very little description. There was no build up. Try harder.«1234» Very little description. Other than that and a little bit more buildup and detail, it is excellent. Other than that and a little bit more buildup and detail, it is excellent.
