Wish there was more description in the beatings the assholes got and the after effects and reactions of others at the party, but maybe you’ll give us more in your next attempt.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 12:21:29While I applaud your effort. I would suggest that in the future you either get someone to proof read for you. xxx full hd I like and prefer “good guy”, “hero” stories, especially when the assholes get what they deserve. I would suggest that in the future you either get someone to proof read for you. At the very least wait a day or two and then re-read it your self. I was basically on long paragraph. Not a great attempt for a first try plenty of room for improving.«1» I was basically on long paragraph. Most were wrong words being used and some were sentences with words out of order and of course
