5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-06 21:53:50you r so good at writing this but it is short but nevertheless a very good storyREADERReport 2006-10-08 05:49:50good shitREADERReport 2006-07-17 03:14:58Beautiful story keep going with it!READERReport 2006-06-19 18:31:50Very realistic.READERReport 2006-06-19 07:10:23To short not descriptive enough. xxx Potential though.«1» 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-06 21:53:50you r so good at writing this but it is short but nevertheless a very good storyREADERReport 2006-10-08 05:49:50good shitREADERReport 2006-07-17 03:14:58Beautiful story keep going with it!READERReport 2006-06-19 18:31:50Very realistic.READERReport 2006-06-19 07:10:23To short not descriptive enough. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-06 21:53:50you r so good at writing this but it is short but nevertheless a very good storyREADERReport 2006-10-08 05:49:50good shitREADERReport 2006-07-17 03:14:58Beautiful story keep going with it!READERReport 2006-06-19 18:31:50Very realistic.READERReport 2006-06-19 07:10:23To short not descriptive enough. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-06 21:53:50you r so good at writing this but it is short but nevertheless a very good storyREADERReport 2006-10-08 05:49:50good shitREADERReport 2006-07-17 03:14:58Beautiful story keep going with it!READERReport 2006-06-19 18:31:50Very realistic.READERReport 2006-06-19 07:10:23To short not descriptive enough. Potential though.«1»
