decent story i suppose, but i really do have to agree with the sum of the above comments; you really need to proof read your stories. xxx hd how do i put this nicely… keep writing, but sex story or not grammar is a big thing in any story.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-31 22:43:53hmm.. how do i put this nicely… 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-18 09:29:11ummmm… ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck ups. Igave you a 5/10«12» keep writing, but sex story or not grammar is a big thing in any story.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-31 22:43:53hmm.. Igave you a 5/10«12» keep writing, but sex story or not grammar is a big thing in any story.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-31 22:43:53hmm.. Igave you a 5/10«12» Igave you a 5/10«12»
