15 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2012-05-19 02:58:55not too bad of a story but you need to go back to school and learn how to make paragraphs and puncuationREADERReport 2007-02-16 16:56:06longest fucking sentences I’ve ever seen.READERReport 2005-06-25 21:58:31Damn this story WAS great!! xxx full hd it made me cum, but the BIG problem is that you need PARAGRAPHS it would have made reading it sooooooooooooooooo much easier was it was hotREADERReport 2005-05-05 16:20:51I read two lines and I knew this was a MORON !!READERReport 2004-11-22 02:06:44I refused to read this piece of shit due to the lack of punctuation, period. it made me cum, but the BIG problem is that you need PARAGRAPHS it would have made reading it sooooooooooooooooo much easier was it was hotREADERReport 2005-05-05 16:20:51I read two lines and I knew this was a MORON !!READERReport 2004-11-22 02:06:44I refused to read this piece of shit due to the lack of punctuation, period.
