9 comments«12»READERReport 2007-11-11 21:25:09I would suggest that you proof readand not just depend on spell checker. xxx full hd Remember you must do it before writing it.«12» Go a head and startREADERReport 2007-05-21 21:56:39made me cumREADERReport 2006-10-12 10:44:08Very good first attempt. After you draft your next one, try reading it aloud to catch the little grammar problems and the few word choice issues in this one. Keep at it!READERReport 2006-05-13 23:24:28That was great keep up the true stories. Remember you must do it before writing it.«12» Having wrote that I liked the story and look forward to your next effort.READERReport 2007-07-28 04:30:13He should have the women laying doggy style and fuck each in turn ,one minute fuckingyou while toching Kizas cunt and ice versa. After you draft your next one, try reading it aloud to catch the little grammar problems and the few word choice issues in this one.
