either evan or some government needs to take him out, preferably evanAnonymous readerReport 2015-03-08 22:46:57Don’t listen this fuck telling you to do one more chapter. end of this chapter was silly , idiotic , badly thought out & executed .. xxx excuse the pun.Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-15 13:56:27The comodore must die, he is despicable. like have Evan (with Emmanuelle maybe?) accidentally snuff the Commodore, and use his credibility to become chairman of the group that owns & operates Club Fatale. Keep on making the story, we love it.Anonymous readerReport 2014-10-15 06:06:30When if ever are you going to either ad to this story or write one more chapter that wraps it up… C, section ? 25 comments«12345»SteweirdReport 2023-07-12 21:52:40Interesting.Anonymous readerReport 2016-01-28 23:34:05caesarean ?
