26 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-16 11:30:05Not bad, though an alternate form of quotation would suffice for dragonspeak <Like this, for example>
That would make it easier to read when trying to read what they’re saying.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-22 19:58:33You’re POV (Point of View) shifted once or twice in the middle and that just confused me really. xxx hd I love a good dragon story. I would put in more physical details about the characters as well as more description of his change. He Kip piintong e jab area n say pain n give e most pitiful look.. 26 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-16 11:30:05Not bad, though an alternate form of quotation would suffice for dragonspeak <Like this, for example>
That would make it easier to read when trying to read what they’re saying.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-22 19:58:33You’re POV (Point of View) shifted once or twice in the middle and that just confused me really.
