I would highly recommend that you continue writing but PLEASE find an editor program to assist you in the future.«123» i simply wrote a story from my past to let go of it. 14 comments«123»greencarnage13Report 2011-01-19 03:44:40i loved ur story but wat happen who opened the door n came in n did ya get caught i want 2 read of wat happen nextgreencarnage13Report 2011-01-19 03:44:28i loved ur story but wat happen who opened the door n came in n did ya get caught i want 2 read of wat happen nextpuddintain55Report 2010-07-20 05:58:35To the reader on 7-13-2010 that said who said you were going to report this story to the POLICE you couldn’t even spell police right. xxx video hd Your only redeeming factor is that you have a fairly vivid imagination, since I truly doubt that this is based on real life events. Your grammar is on a 3rd
