A story is supposed to create a picture, until you barely realize you’re reading anymore and you feel like you’re there, watching what’s going on. I agree with those people… xxx full hd Try to be a little more vivid when you write. So why should we be subjected to stories that are so poorly constructed? This story did nothing for me. This story did nothing for me. People who don’t edit their stories before posting them are assuming that their audience are as moronic and sloppy as what they are. Who enjoys watching grainy quality pornos ? I agree with those people… Maybe a wee bit too short and it needs a little more detail.«1» Kudos for that I suppose.READERReport 2004-07-16 23:32:53The mother-fucking author did not even edit this piece of shit before posting it.
