4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-28 07:12:31Thanks guys, I just about lost it lokiong for this.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-30 00:45:16Very good, I enjoyed it alot. xxx hd maybe next time you can have him take her completely.BatrachianReport 2009-10-03 08:04:50What a clever atmospheric story. Keep writing!sexymamaReport 2009-10-02 16:47:16this needs a lot more work talk about the people a little so it will be more interesting and there is no need for his side her side writing its the same story all round but over all it was ok«1» It is so easy to provide banal facts; the fact that you left out all explanation added a real frisson. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-28 07:12:31Thanks guys, I just about lost it lokiong for this.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-30 00:45:16Very good, I enjoyed it alot. It is so easy to provide banal facts; the fact that you left out all explanation added a real frisson. Keep writing!sexymamaReport 2009-10-02 16:47:16this needs a lot
