i liked the story. hey, man. xxx it was pretty good. hey, man. i read it all the way to the end. hey, man. hey, man. especially if your writing two novels. you can try harder with those. it was pretty good. i liked the story. you can try harder with those. flowery description, but its cut short by spelling and grammatical errors. i gave it an eight out of ten,READERReport 2005-07-17 10:13:41veryvery dumb«1» it reminded me of my own relationship. i read it all the way to the end. i read it all the way to the end. you can try harder with those. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2005-08-16 03:18:55that’s not cool. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2005-08-16 03:18:55that’s not cool. especially if your writing two novels. i liked the story. flowery description, but its cut short by spelling and grammatical errors.
