It would have been so much better if you could spell better or at least knew a literate friend who would proof-read your story and correct the errors. xxx video hd With a little more attention to detail, your story would be very good.«1» Thank’s !! 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-06-15 16:52:19That was a wonderful storyAnonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 16:06:38Very hot and FUN story. It would have been so much better if you could spell better or at least knew a literate friend who would proof-read your story and correct the errors. You should also learn how to correctly use quotation marks and apostrophes. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-06-15 16:52:19That was a wonderful storyAnonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 16:06:38Very hot and FUN story. You should also learn how to correctly use quotation marks and apostrophes. (countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 12:19:13I enjoyed your story even though it contained many misspelled words.
