11 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-03-11 06:12:09You’re an amazing writer, so keep doing this, please. Here’s the kicker does NOT cover it!!! xxx hd Grammr and Spell check, plus add more paragraph spacing. Otherwise, awesome.Anonymous readerReport 2016-02-28 20:28:48Halfway through the first chapter and there are so many contradictions it’s fucking ridiculous!!!? as is this is unreadable delete at once and stop writing until you learn to do it properly.«123» Timid and shy yet down to earth!!? as is this is unreadable delete at once and stop writing until you learn to do it properly.«123» Otherwise, awesome.Anonymous readerReport 2016-02-28 20:28:48Halfway through the first chapter and there are so many contradictions it’s fucking ridiculous!!!? Here’s the kicker does NOT cover it!!! Here’s the kicker does NOT cover it!!!Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-08 17:07:18total trash delete and have a GOOD WRITER rewrite it for you, you couldn’t write to save your life.
