what a shame, I was enjoying this up to the last 3 chapters…Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-28 14:55:24I would highly recommend you get a good proof reader. I do really enjoy your story but the lack of good English takes away from your story. xxx 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-20 10:15:22@djb: Getting jealous are we?djb8247Report 2015-08-29 03:23:09It now seems (to me at least) that you have definitely lost the plot, too much going on, and now it seems to be just sheer unadulterated, PURE RUBBISH. 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-20 10:15:22@djb: Getting jealous are we?djb8247Report 2015-08-29 03:23:09It now seems (to me at least) that you have definitely lost the plot, too much going on, and now it seems to be just sheer unadulterated, PURE RUBBISH. with some help please.Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-26 06:39:29Lol.
